You don't have to read this... Feedback Wanted

by Sparkplug 77 Replies latest jw friends

  • MerryMagdalene
    MerryMagdalene

    w o w, Sparkplug !!! Keep writing... and sharing !!!

    ~Merry

  • avishai
    avishai

    Holy CRAP! That's absolutey amazing. Bukowski, Hemingway, Kerouac, none of those guys has anything on you. Some of the best writing I've ever,ever,ever read. Period. Also accessed some of my damn issues, but oh well!!

    Keep it up, you have one hell of a gift. I am in awe.

  • Sparkplug
    Sparkplug

    Avashai-**blush**

  • avishai
    avishai

    Alright, Do ya have any more? Please? Even if it's not this story? Are ya still writing?

  • Sparkplug
    Sparkplug

    I will attempt it. I have been short on time. I work a 40 hour week. Three kids with extra activities..soccer, band, etc., and a what is turning into a second full time weekend job (photography). Oh and full time student and charity organization chairperson.. But everyday I think of writing and hopefully soon I will. Maybe I will take a break from here and use that time in between to put some of this crud in my head on paper.

    You are so sweet to ask for more. Makes me all happy!

    Look at me up at 2:30 and I have to get up for work in 3 hours. I am a bit nuts...

  • Sparkplug
    Sparkplug

    For fear of being a bit annoying. I am sending this BTT for FMZ. Trying to get a laugh out of him!

  • nilfun
    nilfun

    Wow. I missed this.

    Real -- and true writing, Sparkplug. Very moving

    Brother Brown would kick back in his recliner and go to sleep but if you tried to change the channel, he was immediately not asleep.

    LoL! Now that sounds familiar...

  • tijkmo
    tijkmo

    whatever happened to the next chapters sparky

  • Sparkplug
    Sparkplug

    Nilnuf- thanks for taking the time. I know it is long and I have not gotten another spurt of inspiration so I guess to those here on the board, my past stops at 8 or 9 yrs of age. lol

    did you laugh?

  • nilfun
    nilfun

    Yes, but there were a few times where you tricked me! I found myself chuckling, then BLAMMO! you whacked me upside the head with something very tragic.( <---the gamut)

    There were a few things in there that stirred up some old memories, good and bad...I'm glad I got the chance to read your work.

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