Personally, I would focus more on shorter paragraphs and things that Disney would directly care about:
- Disney may think they are helping out a quirky super conservative xian group, but in fact it is a sinister high control group.
- This is a hate group that teaches everyone will become white in Paradise, women are inferior, and homosexuality is wrong. They even recently produced children's videos encouraging kids to tell their peers that their homosexual parents are sinners.
- They are against the Magic Kingdom and all kinds of magic in children's entertainment. They have recently produced a children's video explaining that Satan is happy when they play with wizard toys.
- They do not believe in protecting children, and are now the subject of ongoing legal action in several countries for forcing molestation victims to tell graphic rape details to pastors, denying rapes happened, blaming victims and threatening them not to go to authorities.
- Many Disney movies are prohibited for them to see because they contain magic or any other thing on their lengthy list of no-nos.
Insert links backing up all of these things, and I think you've got a strong case they will pay attention to.