Please correct these sentences. (page 6)

Oubliette

I see urchins. Do you see urchins? Icy urchins. Sea urchins:

Sea urchins

compound complex

Thanks, Nancy and Oubliette!

Any commas, hyphens and a sole period in the wings?!?!?!

CoCo One-ders?

rip van winkle

James an over the hill sort of fellow went into the library to find some quiet only to find it jammed with noisy 8 to 12 year old urchins.

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Morning CoCo!

James, an over-the-hill sort of fellow, went into the library to find some quiet, only to find it jammed with noisy 8-12 year-old urchins.

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Punk chew Aay shun is not my forte.

My forte is not my forte.

compound complex

Wonderful, rip!

Good job. One small thing:

"8- to 12-year-old urchins" [the 8- is linked to 12-year-old]

Will offer explan later . . . off to work.

Have a good day, ALL!

CC

THE GLADIATOR

Reaching the station, the sun came out and said “Hi I’m gay and I’m hot."

As Lucy began to prepare a special treat for her Thanksgiving guests she gazed towards the sea and thought about the fate of the 24 sea urchins whose tongues would soon be an important ingredient in her special recipe. Their fate like the turkey in her oven bound together in a strange sacrificial feast. She mixed together the onion,dry sherry, cilantro and the olive oil and of course the delicate tongues of the poor hapless sea urchins and spread them over some rustic bread slices. Her guests smiling with anticipation reached gingerly for the treat and smiled with satisfaction as they raised their wine glasses in celebration of the holiday.

compound complex

THE GLADIATOR:

You are very clever and funny !

Thank you for adding to the fun/education.

Nancy Drew:

I believe you are the one who could make a silk purse out of a sow's ear!

Thanks for your humorous, well-written tale.

CC

nancy drew

A pleasant day to all

Eat, drink and dance under the stars

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