by Abandoned 70 Replies latest social entertainment
Actually, though, I'm simply an idiot. That makes it really easy for me to make the same mistakes over and over and over and over and over and over again.
No ur not Dork!! (J/K) u are really creative don't let my advatar make u feel Blue LOL. u should try to get these poems published just a suggestion
XOCO
We'll just have to agree to disagree then. I do have inside information though...
Publishing my poems? That's another area where I am deficient in. I just can't seem to promote my work. I can plan it, write it, edit, and polish it, but I just can't seem to promote it. OH well. I can't have both talent and common sense both right? Afterall, I dedicated my life to a bunch of anal-retentive morons in New York - how smart could I be?
Thanks for the kind words. I just can't seem to smile right now.
Teddy bear hug
((((Abandoned))))))
XOCO
Oh sure, something I can't disagree with...
Thank you though, that did make me smile.
pas problem mon amour (no problem my love)
XOCO
OK, that's two smiles. I'm off to bed though. My head hasn't stopped hurting all night. It isn't a migraine like (that other poster) has, but it is very distracting.
Thanks again.
What You Mean To Me
Raspberry topping on Chicago cheesecake
A relaxing night to just sit and lie awake
A warm, autumn day to drive with the top down
A lazy afternoon in a quiet Midwest town
An extra scoop of ice cream in my ice cream sundae
A smile from a stranger when I’m having a bad day
Finding a parking place right next to the front door
You mean all this to me and so very much more
Chorus:
Have…I…mentioned to you?
What…you bring to my day?
You’re inspirational, simply sensational
So…tell…me
Have I mentioned to you
How you take my anxieties away?
Have…I…mentioned to you?
Have…I allowed you to see?
How precious you are, most precious by far
So…tell…me
Have I mentioned to you
Just what you mean to me?
The rich, leather smell of a brand new briefcase
The sumptuous, first night in my very own place
A warm mocha latte, deep in January
Meeting the girl that I one day will marry
Taking the ferry when time doesn't matter
A whole afternoon dedicated to chatter
Winning first prize in a forgotten contest
You're these things and more and to this I do attest
Chorus:
Have…I…spoken from the heart?
Have…I showed you with deeds?
How much you inspire; how much I admire
Please…tell…me
Have I spoken from the heart
About what you mean to me?
Saturday mornings
The smell of a new car
Smiling children
A weekend in Del Mar
Slurping spaghetti
Quiet time in the country
Sweet, French cologne
My name on the marquee
Chorus:
Have…I…proved it to you?
Have…I made you believe?
You’re friendship is rare, deep respect we share
Let…me…know
Have I proved it to you
Just what you mean to me?
bttt
Any comments? I wrote it about a friend for a contest.
It's beautiful AB!
Reminds me of all the good things in life, the lazy afternoons, drives in the country, warm days, smiles, quiet time etc.
BB
I wish I could play guitar so I could sing it for you guys... I have the tune in my head, but I don't know how to get it anywhere else... Durn it....
Oh, and thank you Bumble Bee, I appreciate your kind words.
