I read the entire letter carefully, and it's a really great job. I'm an editor, and I appreciate that the spelling, grammar and sentence structure are excellent. OK, that's from the anal me, but I just shudder when I read some of the posts here that sound like they were written by someone illiterate. It's important, I think, that people see that those who are leaving are really intelligent, thoughtful people, and that's what your letter shows.
I sent an 8-page letter to my local body of elders when they invited me to a judicial meeting, and I put it here on JWD last year, so that may have been longer than your's, but probably not! I have copied your's to my laptop, and thank you for all the work that went into this. It is really well thought out and very well put together.
I have a mom who is 83 and still a JW, and I would love for her to get out, so don't hesitate to send this. Unfortunately, my mom is hardly a deep thinker on any of these topics and I'm afraid most of this would be way over her head. Let's hope your mom is different.
Again, a great job, and lots of really important information in this. Anyone willing to think, either now or later, will find this letter a huge help in seeing the WTS for what it is.