Jehovah baby: you were my better-half, but just an invitation to the blues. (page 2)

*nods head and snaps fingers to the beat*

Right on, my man....right on. I can dig it!

-Doodle-V

*Tonight on Def Poetry Jam..........Tetrapod...*clap clap clap clap*

Yep Tetra

That's the price for really believing wholsouled in the jw fable. When it's over, a little piece of us dies, never to be revived (trust?)

Cynical?

Nah just a realist.

The demon of "I told you so" wins again

On the other hand that demon wants you to die. Is this not just god in another guise?

Piss e'm all off I reckon and live life as best you can in the freedom of knowing you are a god of your existance.

Peace to you

Andy

That was indeed poignant, Tetra.

Jehovah, "...if lovin you is wrong, I don't wanna be right.."

Jehovah, .."I've got tears in my ears from lyin' on my back cryin' over you..."

Jehovah, "...lay lady lay, lay across my big brass bed.."

whoops, ignore that last one.

Tetra, that was awesome - you touched a deep chord, man. I envy your talent with words.

absolutely amazing.

Good stuff Tetragod, I'll do an extra goat on the hibachi tonight in your honor.

Made me think of the classic: When you look into an abyss, the abyss also looks into you.

Excellent stuff!

Beautiful tetra. Thank you.
tall penguin

Tetrapod

You are an unbelievable writer! I am waiting for a copy of your book. Save one for me.

Cog

Jehovah baby: you were my better-half, but just an invitation to the blues.