Haiku

by ghenrymt 19 Replies latest social entertainment

  • ghenrymt
    ghenrymt

    Quiet, dark midnight
    Stars shine clearly and brightly
    Aurora dances

    ... doggerel

    Post your own ...

    I would rather live in a world where my life is surrounded by mystery
    than live in a world so small that my mind could comprehend it.
    - Harry Emerson Fosdick

  • LittleToe
    LittleToe

    Haunted evenings,
    Watching life slipping away.
    Oh, to turn the tide.

  • funkyderek
    funkyderek

    Generic haiku:

    Five in the first line,
    Seven in the second line
    Five again to end.

    --
    "Theology is never any help; it is searching in a dark cellar at midnight for a black cat that isn't there. Theologians can persuade themselves of anything." -Robert A. Heinlein

  • LittleToe
    LittleToe

    An extra haiku rule:

    And when you add up
    Pluralising "s"'s don't
    Count As syllabuls

  • Gopher
    Gopher

    Leave the borg right now
    Get out of her my people
    Die Watchtower Die!

    J.R.Why shouldn't truth be stranger than fiction? Fiction, after all, has to make sense.
    Mark Twain (1835-1910)

  • ashitaka
    ashitaka

    Souls

    Soul in my body
    sleeping, wraith and diety
    moonlight on water.

  • ghenrymt
    ghenrymt

    Thermonuclear
    their origins; projected
    spaceward - solar flares

    Murky and unclear
    their destiny, dejected
    refugees seek hope

  • ghenrymt
    ghenrymt

    It's 2,3,4,5
    acetooxymercur-
    ithiophene, yep!

    Okay, I know I'm weird.

    Do you find it risible?

    Actually, as I recall, the chemical was 2,3,4,5 TETRAacetooxymercurithiophene. I had to dump a couple of syllables. Even most professional chemists probably wouldn't notice.

  • ghenrymt
    ghenrymt

    I read somewhere that the 5/7/5 syllable pattern is not a hard-and-fast rule, but the poem must be 17 syllables or less. and the poem must be about nature. If it's about something other than nature, then it's considered a different poetic form.

    I need to learn more about the oriental poetic forms.

    I would rather live in a world where my life is surrounded by mystery
    than live in a world so small that my mind could comprehend it.
    - Harry Emerson Fosdick

  • Gopher
    Gopher

    An anti-haiku:

    Silly haiku rule!
    Need it be about nature?
    So many subjects!

    J.R.Why shouldn't truth be stranger than fiction? Fiction, after all, has to make sense.
    Mark Twain (1835-1910)

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