okay the new book reads like a childrens book (short sentences, small vocabulary, simple grammatical constructions). A random sample:
The demons trick people in many ways. When people contact the demons they do it either directly or through someone else, such as a witch doctor or a psychic. Contact with the demons is called demonism or spiritism. But the Bible commands us to stay far away from anything that has to do with the demons. (Galatians 5:19-21) Why? Just as a hunter uses a trap to catch animals, the demons use tricks to trap and control people.
is this really what a book for adults is supposed to read?