Tij:Have you read his other posts about this girl?
It has all the hallmarks of him having already lost his dignity to her, a long time ago...
I CARE
by tsunami_rid3r 15 Replies latest jw friends
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greendawn
If this girl doen't respond there are lots of others that will, no need to get a fixation on one person and waste time that could be better spent.
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tijkmo
i know...thats why hes got nothing to lose...
he can only possibly gain from trying the poem approach
i remember putting a poem...(actually the lyrics to genesis song 'many too many') in the coat of a girl i was in love with many years ago who was all over me one week and ignoring me the next..she wasnt overly impressed (and she still regrets that) but her pal was..so you never know where it might lead
besides with all the advice hes been getting from us mature folk on here tsunami seems intent on doing what his heart tells him anyway...and why not...his persistance might just pay off
and if not at least hes keeping us entertained
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diamondblue1974
Tsu if your poetry is an expression of your emotions then your emotions are wasted on this girl and she is clearly not worth it...save it for someone who doesnt care what others think and thats prepared to take their own decisions life.
DB74
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funkyderek
Having read the poem, I would recommend even more strongly that he doesn't give it to her. The sentiments are embarrassing, the technical quality is poor, and worst of all, it ends with an insult to the girl. It's an all-round bad idea.
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tijkmo
derek you are looking at it from an adult perspective
the poem does not need to be technically brilliant..it just has to be heartfelt
and the ending isnt an insult..its a bit clumsy but it is the way young people talk to each other these days