I feel dark today

by Thunder Rider 15 Replies latest jw friends

  • hillbilly

    CM-- I'm glad you work for us man!

    Shelia- don't get tired holding his leash!

    Chris-- real good words.. I read it about 10 times and its good!...

    Hill (his country lyrics aint got Thunders soul class)

  • Thunder Rider
    Thunder Rider

    Hey folks,
    Appreciate the positive feed back. Sheila is here, she went to a Phi Theta Kappa thing last weekend and i had far too much time on my hands.
    The rage is always there but having a calming influence around holds it at bay.
    I think a lot of us would like to "put things right" for themselves i n one matter or another. For now my rage bleeds from my fingers into a keyboard and onto the screen sated for the time being.

    Thunder ==}>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • gumby
    But still my surroundings be brighter than my minds mood
    Caffeine, nicotine and loneliness fuel the somber rage

    Maybe we just need to find something to do. I'm still thinkin of what to do today


  • LyinEyes

    Thunder, do you have your life story posted on this board? I would like to read more your background. The things you write are so powerful and so tragic, I think I would understand your poems even more so , if I knew more about your past.

  • Thunder Rider
    Thunder Rider


    Not ready to go there yet. Thats why I write fiction and poetry.
    Someday maybe. Thanx for the encouragement.


  • little witch
    little witch

    Wow Thunder, that is very well written and quite beautiful. I really like the balance throughout. It is dark and demanding and hopeful and comforting all at the same tiime.

    Very good work my friend, thanks for sharing it with us!

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