A great article right up until the end. He should've stayed away from saying "at least they won't be knocking on my door". Staunch witnesses will simply see that as a cheap shot and dismiss most of the article because of it.
Just my humble opinion.
Not that there aren't many things that might make witnesses think for a minute, but we need to be careful not to take too many cheap shots as it can be viewed by current members as simply cheap attacks by disgruntled ex-witnesses who are mad they got kicked out.