I am usually not so critical of writing, considering how subjective it is, and so on.
But holy hell. "So I...Um. Threw their gold into the fire. And...Well... Out came this calf." This was written, people! Not written by just anyone, a self appoined spiritual channel to the one and only true God who apparently has all the answers. I expect a lot better than "He was very sorry, so Jehovah forgave him" Shoehorned right at the end to explain Aaron's survival. How Zipporah says so casually, "Oh, Jehovah called him to the Mountain." It reeks of an apparent lack of pacing. I know they probably don't have time for a lot of this stuff, but come on, if this is coming from a Perfect source, it better damn well reflect such. I and many others should expect something spectacular and without any flaw whatsoever.
Art is pretty good though. Such a shame it had to be wasted on this dialouge.
(PS: Really struck me, How exactely do you throw gold into a fire and make a calf out of it? Without the tools to do it. Last I checked, Molten Gold is hot and they didn't have welding equipment. Maybe it was spirit directed, but are you telling me that Satan or a Demon or... Ah this story is so stupid. There is no reason to dig any deeper)