Sing-Crying

by mrsjones5 24 Replies latest jw friends

  • mrsjones5
    mrsjones5

    Tantrums , occur frequently

    Often after a little boy realizes

    that he won't get his way this time,

    that the candy bar lounging on the counter won't

    find it's chocolately insides under his fingernails

    and smeared around his plump lips before dinner

    Sometimes , we aggravated the last-born

    Without our mother's knowledge

    Just for a show

    Dramatic since birth, he cried with a tune

    Composing a woeful ballad on a whim

    in his crumb encrusted booster

    as each crystal tear slid down his cheeks

    Not really forming words, his poignant sobs rose and fell

    like a crisp violin's melancholy solo

    With soft hiccups keeping time

    for lack of a proper metronome

    Baby S even would wail notes of mournful melodies

    until he drifted off to sleep

    We mutely applauded as his eyelids fluttered shut

  • sooner7nc
    sooner7nc

    We mutely applauded as his eyelids fluttered shut.

    Nice Mrs. Jones

  • mrsjones5
    mrsjones5

    My 15 year old daughter wrote that last weekend.

  • wasblind
    wasblind

    I second that Sooner Josie got some Coco talent in her

  • wasblind
    wasblind

    Well I'll be darned !!!!!

  • mrsjones5
    mrsjones5

    She got a talent I would love to have. I'm very proud of her.

    my mini CoCo

  • Hortensia
    Hortensia

    very nice! I love the metronome-like rhythm in these lines, very subtle:

    With soft hiccups keeping time
    for lack of a proper metronome
  • mrsjones5
    mrsjones5

    Wasn't that something? Her writings always surprises me.

  • ShirleyW
    ShirleyW

    does she aspire to be a writer, or writing is just a hobby for her?

  • Open mind
    Open mind

    Like!

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