Post your poems, or others' poems

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  • ashitaka
    ashitaka

    This is my view of the witnesses, keeping to the JW theme here. I'll post a nice love poem too to make up for it.

    Comon people, show me your work, or stuff that you like!

    ashi

    Sounds in the City of Despair
    ........
    These soundless, moving masses
    Clamp me shut, caught in a cask.
    They thunder applause when I falter,
    Kiss the ground when I quiver,
    Break into laughter.

    In quiet, their mouth’s moving
    Silent pistons heating up the room
    Pushing forward, a doomed ship, a doomed ship
    Prying apart my mind like a bow breaking the water.

    A heavy soundless beating
    Piss on a painting
    On a portrait of a woman, a beautiful woman,
    An ugly soundless beating of beauty everlonging
    For a black woundless sight-a coma of night.

    Bitter All become
    Wretching, gagging on a bitter silence
    Clamped in cities, houses, highways,
    All leading to, or there already
    in the city of silent despair.

  • ashitaka
    ashitaka

    San Francisco

    How long will I be alone in the rain?
    I’ve been here for hours
    Watching rain drop from electric cables,
    Hit the street, hands clapping.

    Streched out on the levy,
    hovering outside my window
    we’re making love with mud on our backs
    laughing timidly.

    But your glasses are getting wet,
    Your umbrella is small, you see me staring from across the street;
    Calm down.
    I won’t unbutton your blouse, but your heart will go naked.

    Let’s hop on the next trolly car,
    make love all the way…
    Leap from the curb, onto the raised stair
    then wake me.

  • Celtic
    Celtic

    I searched and I found
    But not that that I was searching for
    It came
    It hit me
    Straight from the wilderness
    I knew not from whence its direction
    But it felt good
    Tasted pleasant

    With the warmth of angels dancing upon dappled sunlit misty waters
    We brought together our kindred spirits
    Softly, gently our fingers touched
    Soft gentle, golden fingers of light
    Joined together in an intimate twine of love and friendship
    We had found the road we were searching for

    Mark Price April '96, one year after leaving, composed whilst backpacking.

    Love and peace

    Mark
    [email protected]

  • flower
    flower

    these are good guys.

    celt, wow.

    i used to write poems but for some reason i cant write when i feel good. only when i'm in the grips of hell. hopefully never again. my writings are mostly about pain and all that yucky stuff.

    flower

  • qadreena
    qadreena

    my poetry is usually a bit dark but anyway, heres one that got published:

    Carrie

    Carrie sat all alone;
    Feelings of being rejected.
    Her knuckles turned white
    as she gripped the low wall
    which fell such a long way down.
    She took a deep breath
    and closed her eyes,
    leaned over a little
    then tumbled...

    A smile came over her face that day,
    Was this the peace she had wanted?
    Maybe someone will think of her now,
    maybe someone will care.

    Or maybe she'll climb back up
    and start again...

    thats it, bet its the first time anyones seen me write in capitals!
    i save them for my poetry

    this poem was written about 2 years ago at a very bad time

  • Smoldering Wick
    Smoldering Wick

    Sea of Dreams

    I close my eyes
    and breathe in
    the night time air.
    Crisp, cool,
    a touch of moisture.
    I feel the wind
    enveloping me,
    like a loving friend.
    I find comfort
    in its strength.
    My body quivers
    as powerful waves
    pound against
    the dark sand.
    Bringing life in them
    ebbing, flowing
    each an experience,
    a period of evolution.
    Surrounded by
    intoxicating sounds,
    stirring my senses with
    majestic symphony.
    The stars gaze
    upon tranquility,
    dancing their glorious
    dance of freedom
    upon glistening waters.
    The moon illuminates
    my heart,
    revealing the
    white radiance
    of eternity.

    Wick-2001

    I stopped writing poetry when I was 17. I didn't write a word again, until last year.

  • ashitaka
    ashitaka

    Here's a favorite of mine, it's by Hart Crane,

    To Brooklyn Bridge
    Hart Crane

    --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    How many dawns, chill from his rippling rest
    The seagull's wings shall dip and pivot him,
    Shedding white rings of tumult, building high
    Over the chained bay waters Liberty--

    Then, with inviolate curve, forsake our eyes
    As apparitional as sails that cross
    Some page of figures to be filed away;
    --Till elevators drop us from our day . . .

    I think of cinemas, panoramic sleights
    With multitudes bent toward some flashing scene
    Never disclosed, but hastened to again,
    Foretold to other eyes on the same screen;

    And Thee, across the harbor, silver-paced
    As though the sun took step of thee, yet left
    Some motion ever unspent in thy stride,--
    Implicitly thy freedom staying thee!

    Out of some subway scuttle, cell or loft
    A bedlamite speeds to thy parapets,
    Tilting there momently, shrill shirt ballooning,
    A jest falls from the speechless caravan.

    Down Wall, from girder into street noon leaks,
    A rip-tooth of the sky's acetylene;
    All afternoon the cloud-flown derricks turn . . .
    Thy cables breathe the North Atlantic still.

    And obscure as that heaven of the Jews,
    Thy guerdon . . . Accolade thou dost bestow
    Of anonymity time cannot raise:
    Vibrant reprieve and pardon thou dost show.

    O harp and altar, of the fury fused,
    (How could mere toil align thy choiring strings!)
    Terrific threshold of the prophet's pledge,
    Prayer of pariah, and the lover's cry,--

    Again the traffic lights that skim thy swift
    Unfractioned idiom, immaculate sigh of stars,
    Beading thy path--condense eternity:
    And we have seen night lifted in thine arms.

    Under thy shadow by the piers I waited;
    Only in darkness is thy shadow clear.
    The City's fiery parcels all undone,
    Already snow submerges an iron year . . .

    O Sleepless as the river under thee,
    Vaulting the sea, the prairies' dreaming sod,
    Unto us lowliest sometime sweep, descend
    And of the curveship lend a myth to God.

  • singsongboi
    singsongboi

    this is about my partner...

    when i was a df'ed -- even tho i knew that it was inevitable' i was truly lost -- spent 6 months trying to put myself back into a neat little box.

    as an incentive, i set suicide as the default if i failed. after 6 months i knew i had failed! but my pragmatic streak said that if i was going to commit that sin (suicide), then go out on a high note... have a holiday on visa card, with a friend - do all the things i only dreamed of, send him home and drive the rented car off a cliff!!!!!!!

    as a candidate for the holiday partner i met chye....never got on that holiday, got involved in his problems and have been together ever since... that was 13 years ago!!! (btw he's just had his 40th birthday-still won't let me buy him a present, but not for the jw reasons).

    so u may glimpse a little of why he is so impartent in my life!!

    The Man Who Shares My Life.

    This man shares my life,
    lying beside me,
    golden skin gleaming
    in early morning light.

    This man shares my body
    as I share his,
    Excitement and pleasure blended
    with the love we share.

    This is my man,
    I live with him.
    I live for him
    I in him and he in me.

    Without him,
    the world would lose its color,
    turning grey and grainy
    like a wet winters morning.

  • ashitaka
    ashitaka

    Nice ones, guys.

    Remember, these poems aren't being critiqued, so post any and all you like, even just ones you find that you guys want to share.

    Keep them coming.

    ashi

  • Mommie Dark
    Mommie Dark

    Homage a Dickinson

    Emilie---
    with her bumpty-rumpty sidhe---
    (sing her poems
    to the tune
    of The Yellow Rose of Texas)
    shy lunatic, gods-blest
    (or curst),
    she travelled the universe,
    saw God and everybody,
    chatted up Mr. Death---
    without leaving her room.

    The wick of her candle
    shone like electrum,
    but daily necessities
    and intercourses
    rendered her tallow
    into a morbidly private shape.

    Her niche
    in the catacombs of resonance
    is graffitoed with impudence
    born under a Texas sun,
    sung to the tune
    of the Yellow Rose of Texas.

    one of Mommie's little ditties...

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