May 22, 1969 Awake! promises "you will never grow old" - Creative Writing

by Mad Sweeney 78 Replies latest jw friends

  • Mad Sweeney
    Mad Sweeney

    The year is 1969. Faithful followers of the Watchtower Society are gearing up for the imminent end of the system of things just as they had been for the previous ninety years. A young Witness named Andrew is trying to decide what to do with his life. Andrew is a smart kid and he has an entire lifetime ahead of him. Many young people from Andrew’s class at school have been drafted into the war. Others have chosen to further their education at college or a university in order to establish a foundation for a life and a family. With his high school graduation less than two months away, Andrew is considering a similar path for himself when the May 22 issue of Awake! magazine arrives in the mail.

    He opens it eagerly and is excited to find that many of the articles, fully half of this issue of the magazine, are devoted to young people like him. He sits down and begins to read.

    While reading he learns it is pointless to try to do good in the world, that even young college students with good motives are part of Satan’s wicked world, doomed to destruction soon. Their protests to end war often end up in bloody battles themselves, proving that as in Noah’s day, the world is filled with violence. Andrew can’t help but fear that if he attends college he might get drawn into the foolish reasoning that he can help change the world or worse, make friends with other young people who don’t know Jehovah.

    On the other hand, Andrew reasoned to himself, to be an effective teacher of the Bible, one needs education. Also, even if I decide to pioneer I will need to have some sort of career in order to support myself, since my parents certainly cannot afford to support me. All the careers I am interested in and would excel at require a college education.

    Andrew kept reasoning to himself this way as he kept reading his Awake! Then, while reading the article, “What Future for the Young?” he was struck by two sentences in the third and fourth paragraphs:

    “If you are a young person, you also need to face the fact that you will never grow old in this present system of things…Therefore, as a young person, you will never fulfill any career that this system offers.”

    That was it. That was the answer he was looking for. Since childhood Andrew had been taught that The Society was God’s only Channel of Communication on earth and the Bible says that, “God cannot lie,” (Titus 1:2) so this must be true. It has to be true.

    The article went on to explain how within the four, six, or eight years it would take to obtain a specialized degree the system would “be well on the way toward its finish, if not actually gone!” It encouraged Andrew to learn a practical trade to support himself and his ministry during the final few years of this system and during the “reconstruction work that will take place in God’s new order.”

    As Andrew kept reading his resolve grew stronger. The final two paragraphs of the article solidified his decision:

    “True, those who do not understand where we are in the stream of time from God's viewpoint will call this impractical. But which is really practical: preparing yourself for a position in this world that soon will pass away? or working toward surviving this system's end and enjoying eternal life in God's righteous new order? -1 John 2:17.

    In these urgent times, as this wicked system writhes in its death pangs, this counsel from God's Word Is most practical for all who want to keep living: "My son, my law do not forget, and my commandments may your heart observe, because length of days and years of life and peace will be added to you." -Prov. 3:1, 2.”

    Obeying God’s commandments means life, Andrew thought to himself. And God’s Channel of Communication says a college education is impractical because the system won’t last long enough to fulfill a career even if it somehow lasts long enough for me to finish college. So that’s it. When dad gets home from work and mom gets home from service I will tell them that I have decided to go work for my uncle, stripping and waxing tile floors while pioneering these last few years of the system.

    The year is 2011. Andrew lets out a groan as he reaches toward the nightstand to turn off his alarm clock. His back and shoulders ache as he sits up to get out of bed. Andrew has been refinishing floors for more than four decades now; forty years of lifting floor buffers in and out of vans have taken their toll.

    The previous night while at work, Bob, the regional manager of the store chain he was working at stopped by to introduce Andrew to his replacement, Doug. “I got my MBA in 1976 and have worked for the company for 35 years,” Bob told Andrew. “Now I’ve got enough time in and enough money saved up, I can retire. The kids are grown and set up with family and careers of their own so they don’t need our help right now. So Joanne and I are going to do some traveling, maybe play a few rounds of golf, and just relax.”

    “Congratulations, Bob. I’m happy for you,” Andrew told him. “How long have you been with the company, Doug?”

    Doug smiled and straightened a can of beans sitting on the shelf beside them. “I graduated in ’92, did a few different things for a few years, and started with the company in ’95. I’ve never looked back and never looked for another job. I love what I do.”

    “Pretty soon you’re going to love what I do,” Bob said with a laugh.

    "I'm sure I will," said Doug, smiling, "only I plan to retire at fifty-five if I can keep putting away savings the way I'm going."

    As they turned and left the store Andrew turned back to the floor buffer and just stood for a moment, lost in thought. Retirement wasn’t an option for him. Not this year when he would turn sixty. Not in ten years when he would turn seventy. Not even in twenty years when he would turn eighty if the system lasted that long. Andrew had spent the last forty-two years struggling to make ends meet as a tile floor refinisher. He had spent the last forty-two years of his life believing that the words he read as an eighteen-year-old in the Awake! magazine, “face the fact that you will never grow old in this present system of things…you will never fulfill any career that this system offers,” were true.

    The year is 2011. And the Bible still says that “God cannot lie.” Andrew gets out of bed, lets out a sigh, and walks to the kitchen to make some coffee.

  • Mad Sweeney
    Mad Sweeney

    Ok, opinions everyone. Do I leave the ending hanging like that or do I keep going?

  • james_woods
    james_woods
    Ok, opinions everyone. Do I leave the ending hanging like that or do I keep going?

    I think you should kill him off, and detail his final thoughts during and before the massive heart attack.

  • snakeface
    snakeface

    Great story! Sadly, it is not fiction. There are thousands of people who make up the "Andrew class". The Andrew class are those who listened to the Jeremiah class and the Jonadab class...

  • St George of England
    St George of England

    I thought 'Bob' (names have been changed) was me.

    When I got married I went to University and got good qualifications. Of course I knew there was so little time for this old system I would never use them.

    Now I am mid 60's, retired and breath a sigh of relief every morning I get out bed. When it comes to education and future financial planning the WTS have never had a clue what they are talking about!

    George

  • keyser soze
    keyser soze

    Sad but true. It breaks my heart to think of all JWs that had potential that will never be realized. My sister is one that comes to mind. She was valedictorian of her class, and was offered several scholarships. Her and my brother-in-law are regular pioneers who sustain themselves with cleaning work.

  • punkofnice
    punkofnice

    Andrew sat down at the table with his steaming coffee sending it's beautiful aroma to tantilsie his senses. This is a comforting smell. He smiles to himself:

    'Silly me. God didn't lie! The governing Body are just imperfect men doing their best. Yes. That's it. That must be it! Phew....for a moment there I almost lost my faith. If that happened all my friends and loved ones would shun me! what a close shave!'

    Deep within Andrew's subconsciuos the familiar pain of 'coganitive dissonance' once again rippled.

    On the TV Andrew noticed there had been an earthquake and tsunami in Japan. He smiled. Satisfied the end would come shortly.

    After all the year is 2011.

    ...............alternative ending..................

    Suddenly in a bizarre and unexpected accident an anvil fell on Andrew's head.

    At his funeral the Brother giving the talk gave praise to the Governing Body and told those grieving to cure their pain by going out in field service.

  • TheClarinetist
    TheClarinetist

    Nice story.

  • miseryloveselders
    miseryloveselders

    This is one of those moments in life where its appropriate after reading something like this to take a deep breath and say, "damn."

    Ok, opinions everyone. Do I leave the ending hanging like that or do I keep going?

    Leave it hangin, leave the conclusion up to the reader. The point was made, and its fitting to leave specifics of the conclusion in limbo as it coincides with the limbo we as long time JWs are in.

  • Mad Sweeney
    Mad Sweeney

    That's where I am leaning, too, Miz.

    I considered going on and having him sit down with his coffee to pick up the April 15, 2011 Watchtower and read the article on "Divine Guidance" coming from the Borg, the one in Flipper's post from last night that pretty much equates the GB with God. But as it is, it is somewhat subtle. I don't know that I want to beat readers over the head with the point.

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