I have written a 15 page WT style article for JW teens. Primarily for my kids
It is formatted in two column justafied type like watchtowers etc as that is a familier format for them.
It covers thoughts on dedication and baptism in an effort to make them think.
I want somebody to proof read, and possibly help me see if and where i may need to add or delete material. Whether i need to include particular quotes from society literature in places and generaly help me make sure it is accurate. It is worded carefully to avoid any apperance of apostacy etc. the person needs to bear in mind that it is to appeal to teenagers, so at places it does not nor is intended to go into great detail.
i would hope that a teenager may be on the board that would like to be involved also.
i will provide a link to sendspace (PDF file) for those interested in helping.
when i am happy with it, i am happy to share with all...