I have to admire your determination and passion - but take issue on your style of writing. Humour is ok on this board where we all know what we mean, but you are addressing outsiders . Also some things are just not true , e g :
"the organization could disfellowship you (excommunicate you) for such crimes as disagreeing with the organization, associating with disfellowshipped friends or relatives, accepting medical care that goes against current doctrine (blood transfusions, organ transplants, etc)"
Organ transplants are acceptable to J Ws, no problem ..
"family are disfellowshipped from the JWs, they must be shunned. You must never speak to them..."
We all know of of d/f that are spoken to, every dub has a different conscience on this. The WT allows for "necessary family business"
"they do not want you to read older publications "- Why then is every K/Hall library full of them ?
also dubious are the comments
J C not mediator... "probably about 75% of JWs aren't even aware of this doctrine)." - guesswork on your part
" Paranoia runs rampant". - generalisation on your part
"In fact, JWs have one of the highest divorce rates of any religion" - source citation please?
As a piece of work , I think my old lecturers would make some caustic comments in red...
But I like your spunk !