A Poem To a Dieing God

by sweetstuff 16 Replies latest jw friends

  • sweetstuff
    sweetstuff

    I like to write poetry, mostly mushy girly stuff, but I am sometimes inspired by my freedom from the borg and great places like JWD to write something a little different. Here goes, hope you enjoy!

    To a Dieing God

    I look at you now, my eyes brimming with glee,
    For they are truely wide, they truely see.
    See the corruption, hate and disdain,
    For any who dare to say your to blame.
    Fear now it grips you, tightening its rein,
    Now you feel it, the mindnumbing pain.

    You have no more power, no threat that will make me heed,
    your dismissal is my final deed.
    I walk away my head held high,
    looking up and laughing towards the sky,
    at a dieing god, who's time is done,
    knowing the awakening has begun.

    Your days are numbered and your servants few,
    In panic and fervor you now try to woo,
    lost souls you enrapture with your pan's flute,
    but your fear betrays whats at your very root.
    Love laced with poison, bitter and cruel
    Desperate to hand on to your faltering rule.

    You order a strike upon those who oppose,
    hoping to wipe out the very blush of a newborn rose.
    But the rose grows strong while your seed withers and dies,
    caught up in your own bed of lies.

  • Stephanus
    Stephanus

    Nice Poem. Deep and heartfelt.

    It's nice to be able to move on, whatever others may think of you.

  • purplesofa
    purplesofa
    It's the dying spelling that worries me...

    asshole comment as usual Stephanus

    I thought the poem was beautiful and you have the brains to back up the beauty thats on the outside and in your heart.

    Thanks for sharing

    purps

  • What-A-Coincidence
    What-A-Coincidence
    It's the dying spelling that worries me...

    asshole comment as usual Stephanus

    lol

    Nice poem babe!

  • frankiespeakin
    frankiespeakin

    Very good! Nice way to say good bye to the floppy old chap.

  • LearningToFly
    LearningToFly

    Great poem Sweetstuff

    LTF

  • Gopher
    Gopher

    Well done, Sweetstuff.

    God may not even exist, and if he/she/it/they does or do exist, then it's nothing like what's portrayed in mythology (including much of the Bible).

    Saying bye-bye to Sky Daddy and taking control of one's own life can be a large step towards the frame of mind where you are responsible and in control, not awaiting direction or imagined safety from some invisible power who has abandoned mankind.

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  • Cicatrix
    Cicatrix

    Woohooo! You go, girl!

    I love the part about the flute of Pan! Ha ha, wouldn't the WTS just love THAT analogy.

  • sweetstuff
    sweetstuff

    Thanks guys, on the spelling count, I wrote at 3:30 am so I plead guilty on that count.

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