anyone else write anti J-DUB poetry???? (page 2)

theinfamousone

WOW! its amazing....

i love it

the infamous one

AlmostAtheist

Way cool stuff. Thanks!

I especially liked the "contradiction" one and the "bet with the devil" one.

Dave

A pedophile paradise.
How can that be?
God’s organization is pedophile free.

We refuse to believe it.
We don’t want to know.
So victim defenders know where to go.

The angry apostates
just make up their lies,
Pretend to be honest but it’s just a disguise.

Deserve what they got
It’s Satan they follow
To their debauched level they want us to wallow.

To protect the abusers
Ignore victim pain
That’s how we protect our God’s name.

It’s only a few elders
who made a mistake
So a new policy we will not make.

So block up our ears
Put our heads in the sand
Disfellowship them all, is the Watchtower command.

Now listen you brothers
Oh hear me you must
Do you know who it is, you can trust?

The witness policy
Allows abusers go free
Let’s them take your child to sit on their knee.

Please watch them with care
Confidentiality a must
You’ll never know which brother, is the one you can trust.

Lady Lee

Control Me

How to think, What to feel, Tell me what to say. To save me, Protect me, Tell me what to do. When to work, When to pray, Control all my moves. Take my mind, Take my heart, Tell me where to start. To mark me,
To shun me,
Punish me for now.

Free will gone,
So is self,
No identity.

Control me,
Mold me,
Tell me what to be.

Lady Lee

Honor the Children

So many children
Over so many years
Their innocence lost long ago
Told to the elders
As expected to do
Ignored by the two-witness rule.

Sent home to abusers
Afraid and alone
To wait for their God to convict
Silence they’re told
Is their honor to bear
To protect their God from this shame.

But the shame that they bear
To another belongs
The truth is all that they need
Let’s hear their sad stories
Like we didn’t before
Support the abusers no more.

Rage and disgust
Is what we should feel
At the silence and pain that they bore
Honor the children
And give them support
Let’s stop the abuse evermore.

TopHat

Good one Lady Lee ***HIGH FIVES***

TopHat

***HIGH FIVES** TO ALL....very talented bunch you are!

Nathan Natas

This was written by a friend on a Yahoo! discussion board:

Today my family went away,
I really meant for them to stay,
they left without a pause or thought,
they thought I really had forgot,
that God meant love, forgiveness too,
they did not know the hurt they'd do,
they told me that the hurt was good,
they thought that this was understood,
they thought it would help make me strong,
they thought the pain, would not last long,
they thought that they should punish me,
that then, the "light," I'd surely see,
they thought that on my own I'd know,
that time and space would help me grow,
they thought, and thought, and thought some more,
they did not see the open sore,
the sore that hurt so long and deep,
the hurt that made me cry and weep,
and then one day a funny thing,
they felt their own vindictive sting,
their light had failed to set them free,
they thought and thought, and thought of me.

by Cbam52, posted on Yahoo!

AuldSoul

Betrayal nears and tilts its head

Unctuous, hurtful, snide

Lovingly clothed in fluffy white

L ifting hands to smooth the wool

Stripping to reveal

Hateful snarling accusation

Intimidating visage

Teeth to tear and claws for mauling

Accusing pride

Set aside reality

Sup on ignorance and pretense

Here we are, to help you

Out of misery and despair

Let us grease you, pray for you

Eventually you will heal

Swap your questions for air

Integrity?

Almost lost

My longing nearly cost me

Never speak to them?

Ones I love? I will speak!

They will hear, they will choose

Years will pass

Old friends will die

Used up, cast off, spent

Revealing no hoped for promise

Fools will still believe

Reality obscured by baseless hope

Instead of paradise, air

Evidently "purpose" changes

No one knows the past

Destroyed by time and ignorance

Leolaia

That's some pretty great writing! Lady Lee and Auld Soul really capture two sides of the same emotion. I keep thinking it might be kewl to publish a literary "Best-of" of some of the gems that this board has seen.

You might remember my poetic history of the WTS a while back:

http://www.jehovahs-witness.com/12/99142/1.ashx

anyone else write anti J-DUB poetry????

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