On a positive Note,
They are great people to talk to when you are planning to buy a new bike.
Rub a Dub
Mormons celebrate 200 years
by oldflame 31 Replies latest watchtower beliefs
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RubaDub
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Check_Your_Premises
*mental note* must find good ending.
How about after he tries to end the religion when his conscience awakens, their is a group that refuses to believe it. A new leader arises calling him a "prophet turned apostate". The group goes on without him in a mindless rampage of deciet and lies. He is a destroyed man having lost his group and his soul.
The story needs redemption though. He could start off as a kid with some sort of decent religious upbringing through a grandmother maybe. It doesn't take for him. He is taken in by bad influences and is a natural hustler. He sees what his grandmother taught as a way to hustle.
Bookend it in the ending by having him somehow return to that original upbringing in a simple, true, and honest sense. Leave his group to go on to highlight the self-sustaining nature of these self-congratulating religions are, and to show the damage caused by one mans weakness. He thought he was in control, but he unleashed forces beyond his control.
CYP