Oh gosh....you wrote what I always fear..........that I won't have a chance to live my life....
beautiful, tex.... but i am crying.
One Moment In Time
by Big Tex 16 Replies latest social entertainment
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Surreptitious
Jesus Christ, what are you trying to do to me?
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Big Tex
that I won't have a chance to live my life
It's like the man said, life is but a poor player and only a moment on the stage. Savor now. Breathe deeply life and appreciate the good times and the bad. It will gone in just a moment.
((simplesally))
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talesin
BT
Your character is real, the writing is from the heart (would have expected no less from yerself). Nice work! Can't wait to read your memoirs ...
btw, you said
It will gone in just a moment.
promise??? Okay, then, I will believe ...
tks {{{BT}}}
talesin
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calamityjane
Great writing Big Tex.
But I preferred Valis' ending.
Kidding aside, it was awesome.
cj
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SixofNine
Now starts the craft of the Father
I think I found your inspiration?
Wow Chris, that is amazing writing. If you had made me read it in public and played the song, I'd've had to punch you in the arm.
Song for Surreptitious: http://nomenclature3.tripod.com/this_womans_work.wma
Seriously Chris, this will get published if you shop it around enough.
Six~ who doesnotreadfiction
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franklin J
Big Tex
your writing is excellent. You should do something with that ability.
The subject matter was touching; the scenario horrific. Bone chiliing. I recoiled and had to go back to finish reading it.
You have so vividly articulated my worst nightmare since the 9/11 event . I refuse to take my children aboard an aircraft since 9/11.
I am still shuddering.
I like Valis' ending better. I can live with that.