very nice.....very nice indeed.
The Segmentation Fault of the Soul
by SYN 16 Replies latest jw friends
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Vivamus
Loved it.
Started this morning, had to leave it midway, and finished it right when I came home from work.... Loved it.
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Blue Bubblegum Girl
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SYN
Thanks guys. I've been going through a lot of stuff lately, exciting and good stuff, but also very emotional, so this is my way of letting those feelings loose
I've probably written several War & Peaces on this site alone, hehehehe!!!!!
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SYN
*bumpity bump bump bump*
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joannadandy
William Gibson?
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bebu
I like your descriptions. Easy to read, and interesting.
Can you reconcile/adjust for the discrepancies for living people not having features--yet the son, daughter, and granddaughter are well-defined?
bebu
Easy reading is damned hard writing. -Nathaniel Hawthorne, writer (1804-1864)
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SYN
Joanna: Bingo!
Bebu:
This is probably something that I didn't explain properly in the story, in my rush to get it down before the vision left my head! The way I saw it happening, people's features could be made out with some practice, but not easily by people who'd just arrived in this "landing zone" place. So yeah, it was something I thought about...our main man in this story's been there for a while, so he probably learnt how to look at people without hurting his "eyes"....but thanks, it's a good question!Can you reconcile/adjust for the discrepancies for living people not having features--yet the son, daughter, and granddaughter are well-defined?