A beautiful rendition.
"Translation. Ave Maria was originally in Latin, but here is the English translation: Hail Mary, full of grace, the Lord is with thee, blessed art thou among women, and blessed is the fruit of thy womb, Jesus. Holy Mary, Mother of God, pray for us sinners, now and at the hour of our death."
Doctrinally speaking, all is scripturally based except for the last line invoking prayer from Mary.
One Catholic hymn I really appreciate is, The Bread of Life