My Recent Escape

by compound complex 14 Replies latest jw friends

  • nancy drew
    nancy drew

    he stood there waiting for his lunch some juicy salmons he could munch

    I think his name was smiddyguy that bearlike sparkle in his eye

    It'd been some time since he had dined for something tasty he had pined

    the earth was filled with many goods he'd been a long time in the woods

    his broken ship crash landed here a salmon passed he grabbed his spear

    thankful that his spear was trusty Oh my God! i think it's Rusty.

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Good, Nancy -- GOOD!!!

  • millie210

    I love the free flowing poetry round!

    Nice ones Nancy!

    Smiddy! Whoah, you did really good! That may be your first poetry but I hope you will keep going now!

    Coco - look what you have started - you are an inspiration.

  • nancy drew
    nancy drew

    As Rusty headed through the pass

    Lilly wandered through the grass

    would their hopes of freedom die

    Will fate give them another try?

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Thanks, millie and Nancy, for the nice thoughts and the poetry!

    Always a delight!

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