Anyway, it was really enjoyable. I love how Friday holds the package up to his ear, shakes it twice and recognizes the sound of English walnuts!!! Lol!!
Detective Walter M. Friday
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compound complex
Thanks, Rip!
That Det. Friday is one of a kind: he operates on guts, intuition and can tune in to an Alpine Avalanche in A minor . . .
CoCo
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Glander
Mickey Spillane, Raymond Chandler, P.G. Wodehouse, Agatha Christy, ...who am I missing ?
Amazon kindle special -
"The Big Squeeze, a Detective Friday Escapade Introspection"
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compound complex
Glander:
Wodehouse is my fave, and if you don't appreciate my unremitting kindness, I'll kick your spine through your hat . . . !!!
CC
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Glander
and I would slug you so hard...but I won't...I won't... I don't want to pull my fist back through the broken bones...snarl.
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rip van winkle
Guys, I love the raillery!!
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talesin
Yes! Trim the fat ........... love this new story,, you are getting 'there'.
xo
tal
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gorgia2
Great read CC! Happy you've had time to let your creative juices ferment, glad you're back.
gorgia
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compound complex
Thank you, Glander, rip, Tal and gorgia, for your comments.
As an editor, I offer other writers suggestions as to content, structure, etc., but, then, do make necessary corrections as to grammar, spelling, punctuation -- you know, the technical stuff.
Regarding the so-called fat of this tongue-in-cheek tale, the non sequiturs, the lapses into ludicrous, verbose incongruity, the juxtaposing of insanity against stark reality are all simply a part of the mix. It's meant to be nonsense.
Nonetheless, anything you wish to add or subtract is meaningful to me, and I do consider it as important.
All the best.
CoCo
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compound complex
Put this in your pipe and smoke it . . .