You stand there and judge...

by MsGrowingGirl20 11 Replies latest social entertainment

  • MsGrowingGirl20
    MsGrowingGirl20

    You stand there,

    clutching your magazines to your chest...

    as if you are drowning and it is your life vest.

    As if it gives life.

    But it does, doesn't it?

    These magazines contain the commands

    from your masters,

    Camouflaged as God, to you

    the sheep

    and to me,

    the wolf

    It gives warnings of impending and imminent death...

    If i don't believe

    what you believe.

    You stand there and you judge me...

    And everyone else who is too busy or who are just not interested in listening to the

    rambling thoughts of your masters.

    You judge me,

    because I'm not you

    Anymore.

    I'm not you anymore.

    I no longer eat their spiritual 'food'

    I no longer follow their rules

    I am no longer a fool.

    From their mass deception, I have broken free

    Their traditions, no longer flow through me

    I'm different

    You say

    "hmmm...what has she become?"

    Well, could it be that I no longer allow my mind to be spoonfed with dung?

    You judge me

    Because I...Yes I THINK

    and i think HARD

    Systematically, critically, logically and truthfully

    Thinking that is free from lies, cover ups, red herrings, slander, over-simplification, free from judgementalism,

    free from partiality,free from circular reasoning,

    FREE FROM BULLSHIT!

    You judge me because I now think for myself?

    I've taken off that mask and burnt it to nothing,

    Spread myself bare to life and love and laughter.

    ...you don't talk to me.

    So, I will look you in your eyes,

    smile

    and walk on.

    While hoping that some day,

    some day soon,

    You begin to think.

  • MsGrowingGirl20
    MsGrowingGirl20

    Wrote this for a spoken word poetry class that i joined but i don't think that they'll understand it really. It's unique to persons who share our experiences. So i decided to post it here.

  • Tater-T
    Tater-T

    It's still good~ anyone would appreciate it .. well done

  • NeverKnew
    NeverKnew

    This is great, GrowingGirl! I'm sure hearing it would be even more powerful. :)

    I agree with Tater. Good job.

  • jam
    jam

    Excellent read!!!

  • MsGrowingGirl20
    MsGrowingGirl20

    Thank you...i hope that they aren't confused.

  • Tater-T
    Tater-T

    others will see it how they want.. as metaphors .. for something controling them.. I'm guessing it will be a big hit in class..

    I love it.. let us know how the class reacts

  • MsGrowingGirl20
    MsGrowingGirl20

    Okay...i will

  • Pickler
    Pickler

    It's great! Others will take their own meanings from it, well done!

  • MsGrowingGirl20

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