Have you written any poetry? Want to share it?

by Lozhasleft 25 Replies latest jw friends

  • Lozhasleft
    Lozhasleft

    Its ages since we had a poetry thread...feel free to share your literary compositions here......

    Loz x

  • Lozhasleft
    Lozhasleft

    I'll go first then....this one is a bit serious....

    NOTHING

    In the lonely dark

    they drove you

    in a final embrace.

    The groans of men,

    the thud of coffins

    transformation of forces

    pass thought in marble

    never quite balanced.

    Don’t confuse, seen in such a light,

    do more damage than good.

    Recount.

    I was home with all of you.

    When you have nothing

    you have nothing.

    The peasant in you

    is all alone.

    Our delicate feet will touch the earth

    again.

    Long is the night

    saying goodbye,

    taking only my farewell with me

    around my neck

    I unharness the focus

    of the situation

    behind the curtain.

    Life is strife and

    we cannot retrace our steps.

    I am a tide of wounds

    from a distance

    caught in dew.

    A tempest in a teacup

    broken up from nothing

    on the table.

    Go to sleep.

    When you have nothing

    you have nothing.

    I am busy with my dying.

    Loz x

  • Lozhasleft
  • EmptyInside
    EmptyInside

    Good Loz.

    I write a lot,but I'll just share one I wrote many years ago. I kind of forget how I described the trees originally,lol. Poetry helped me get through the dub years,without having to be on meds.

    "Nothingness"

    Dimming shadows haunt the moon

    As it hides behind whispering trees

    For the wind is silent

    It escaped the world

    Before it lost its gravity

    And fell in a black hole

    Where time is not counted

  • clearpoison
    clearpoison

    Yes

    No

    CP

  • OUTLAW
    OUTLAW

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  • mouthy
    mouthy

    Ex Witness Lament!!!

    I look upon my life today,
    And wish that i had known
    There was an easer way
    For my children, I could have shown.
    Instead of hours of rushing out
    to meetings,"Doors & Halls"
    To distant towns & cities too!
    Waiting for advice from the Watchtower crew
    There was just one voice to hear
    Who said" Be still my friend"
    My yoke is light ,Your in my site
    no need to rush around each night
    in freezing rain,in sleet,& heat
    expressing you have comely feet
    Many of you walk in pain,a need
    THEY say ,your life to gain."
    HE paid the price for you & I
    Why listen to that lie?
    So lift that yoke ,put on the cloak,
    Salvations HIS to give,
    Lets watch our way,keep in HIS way
    His light will shine our path today....

    All atheists may now toss the rocks LOL

  • talesin
    talesin

    Ode to a Factory

    I think that I shall never see

    A factory lovely as a tree.

    For if the factories aren't abolished

    All the trees will be demolished.

    -----

    Even at 12, I was a budding 'tree-hugger', when I parodied the famous Kilmer poem. :D

    tal

  • talesin
    talesin

    Flashback

    Blood dripping from steel claws

    Makes tracks in my memory.

    Indelible ink for the soul.

    The helmet of death draws nearer.

  • talesin
    talesin

    okay, a happy one, and then I'll shut up ...

    The Numbers Game

    My friend said,

    "Age only matters if you're a wine or a cheese."

    So what does this mean, you may say?

    Seems to me, we're too focused on

    BIRTH - DAY.

    You are beautiful, young and alive,

    Now listen up, gurl, this ain't

    NO JIVE!

    "Youth is wasted on the young",

    A wise person said.

    So, come with me, and we'll

    PAINT THE TOWN RED!

    You're the best, you're the greatest, and

    You help me survive.

    My friend, age is a number,

    But YOU, you are

    YOUNG and ALIVE!

    ------

    t

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