help me finish the lyrics of this song I'm writing...

dawg

Before you add lyrics, if you hear this on the radio, know now you'll get no royalties...sorry, but I'm one cheap bastard. No title as of yet, it sounds kinda Beatles like... like Penny Lane kinda

The world seems colder
And my life still fades

The wine tastes sweeter
My life feels completer
Than my younger days

I thank the lord above
For those I've loved
And the hearts I've caved

Those hot summer nights
When the moon was bright
Oh the loved I've made

But Life is just a crazy dream
Don't get lost in the confusion
Live the life you're living now
It's all just an illusion

But I'd really like to know
Where I our spirits fly away?

VoidEater

Keep the money, but I want co-writing credit (it needs more revision, and a title still):

As the ashes smolder
The world seems colder
And my life's ember fades

The wine tastes sweeter
The grass always greener
Than my younger days

I thank the lord above
For all those I've loved
And all the hearts I've craved

Cool Winter's night
Hot Summer's light
All the loves I've made

(chorus)
And Life is just a crazy dream
Don't get lost in the confusion
Live the life you're living now
Immersed in the illusion
But there's still something I'd like to know
Where do our spirits fly at the end of the show

It's a funny situation
Being in this creation
And learning how to grieve

You'd think being born
Into this mortal form
Would make it easier to leave

It's just this little world
Inside my fingers curled
Teaching me to give

When I think I've got no more
When I'm staring from the shore
Now I learn to live

(chorus)
And Life is just a crazy dream
Don't get lost in the confusion
Live the life you're living now
Immersed in the illusion
But there's still something I'd like to know
Where do our spirits fly at the end of the show

dawg

Damn Void... that's not too bad...LOL!

VoidEater

At your service... ;-)

sweetstuff

As the ashes smolder
The world seems colder
And my life still fades

The wine tastes sweeter
My life feels completer
Than my younger days

I thank the lord above
For those I've loved
And the hearts I've caved

Those hot summer nights
When the moon was bright
Oh the loved I've made

But Life is just a crazy dream
Don't get lost in the confusion
Live the life you're living now
It's all just an illusion

But I'd really like to know
Where I our spirits fly away?

Does it even matter?

If we fly while we live,

Live everyday like no tomorrow,

Try not to hurt, only give

Does it even matter, where our spirits fly to?

I think it only really matters

Is that you be you.

snowbird

Dawg, any special reason this is in Scandals & Cover-ups?

Sylvia

Hortensia

Life is not a crazy dream
Don't get lost in the confusion
Live the life you're living now
Don't trade it for illusions

As the fire burns low
to a gentle glow
and my life is fading away

Wine tastes much sweeter
and life seems fleeter
Than my younger days

Life is not a crazy dream
Don't get lost in the confusion
Live the life you're living now
Don't trade it for illusions

I've lived with true love
and lost my true love
You'd think I'd want to leave

You'd think being born
In this mortal form
Would make it easier to leave

Life is not a crazy dream
Don't get lost in the confusion
Live the life you're living now
Don't trade it for illusions

John Doe

As the ashes smolder
The world seems colder
And my life still fades

The wine tastes sweeter
My life feels completer
Than my younger days

I thank the lord above
For those I've loved
And the hearts I've caved

Those hot summer nights
When the moon was bright
Oh the loved I've made

But Life is just a crazy dream
Don't get lost in the confusion
Live the life you're living now
It's all just an illusion

But I'd really like to know
Where our spirits fly away?
What will I be buying,
with these hairs of gray?

help me finish the lyrics of this song I'm writing...

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