One of my favorite bands is Deicide. I'm sure it's not to any of your tastes, but they have done a few songs that are, to me at least, obviously about the JWs. Their vocalist and writer, Glen Benton, wrote an article about the JWs on their site but I can't get into the site anymore.
I wish I had it; it was very funny. He told them to never come to his house again, and he told them if he ever caught them corrupting his kid's minds with "Craptower" literature(as he called it) he would come to the local Kingdom Hall and wait outside for them. In an interview recently, he mentioned that they did come back and he called the cops and had them escorted out of the apartment complex in the back of a police car.
Anyway here are two song lyrics that are JW related. Let me know what you think.
Halls Of WarshipThey want to witness the arrival of the lord
And the destruction he has promised to us all
Their sick conviction to the ending of the world
Live in prediction he will soon be back on Earth
They think they are the only ones who will be spared
The kingdom of Jehovah isn't really there...
Halls of warship burn, until you touch the ground
Ignited by deceit, your will of god is misperceived
Where's the virtue in the riddles of a dying king?
Exiled in defeat, the end of their regime
They know who rules this world, a tool they use to scare
Brainwash the witnesses to think he's coming here
Their only mission is the pending fear of god
Given permission to pursue a life without
A grim existence for the offspring that they breed
Return to Abraham and let us live in peace!
Halls of warship burn, until you touch the ground
Ignited by deceit, your will of god is misperceived
Where's the virtue in the riddles of a dying king?
Exiled in defeat, the end of their regime
When Satan Rules His WorldOpen the door Jehovah you whore
I am a servant of who rules this world
Archnemesis of your light
One look at me and you know he is I
Run away when confronted with Satan
Always here and forever will be
Your concern for my Lord is becoming
Defecate on your book of belief
Door to door soliciting war
Feeble man with salvation as sword
Disturb and see you will die
For I am of Him in his world you're confined
Why try? World dies, christ hides
When Satan rules his world
Disease, run free, killing
When Satan rules his world
Religion, infliction, obscene
When Satan rules his world
Witness, dismissed, executed
When Satan rules his world
Glen Benton