dark

by John Doe 23 Replies latest jw friends

  • John Doe
    John Doe

    Lonesome winds whisper through the dark valley surrounding the highway that is my soul. I carry a lantern burning from the precarious end of a wick that is shortened with every breath I steal from the hollow vast dampness that wafts through my memories like so many lost thoughts. Somehow I find the courage to continue, for continuing is the only way through the darkness.

    Yet continuing, I know the wind will blow, even though the answers play merrily just beyond the damp darkness, capering around like so many fuzzy puppies. The tiny wick burns slowly, its tired breath illuminating the edges of the path, then following into the darkness beyond the current thoughts of motion. There is no rest, only the forward motion, fighting against the darkness.

    Sometimes I fear my lantern holds a fuse, not a wick. But these thoughts I push away like so many wolf’s eyes glaring from the bushes, hungry and feeling their prize. Rain falls and bridges tremble from the waves somewhere in the darkness, and yet the lantern burns. Ever advancing I take another step, and keep walking.

  • misanthropic
    misanthropic

    wow JD, did you write that? It's beautiful. I know I've read things you wrote on here before but I haven't seen you post anything like this in awhile.

  • nvrgnbk
    nvrgnbk

    Well done John Doe.

  • Double Edge
  • prophecor
  • John Doe
    John Doe
    wow JD, did you write that? It's beautiful. I know I've read things you wrote on here before but I haven't seen you post anything like this in awhile.

    Yes, I wrote it. Haven't written much in a while, and the vast majority is not worth reading.

  • changeling
    changeling

    All that dampness...you brain smells musty...

    changeling

  • Mum
    Mum

    Hey, JD! I loved that. It reminds me of beatnik poetry.

    With admiration,

    SandraC, secret bohemian

  • AWAKE&WATCHING
    AWAKE&WATCHING

    I agree, very nice.

    I've got bongos and a beret. Maybe we could hook up as an act at the local coffee shop.

  • misanthropic
    misanthropic
    Yes, I wrote it. Haven't written much in a while, and the vast majority is not worth reading.


    I thought so, well it's beautiful and I highly doubt the latter part. My favorite thing I've read of yours has always been "Midnight" but I think this is just as great in a different way.
    I hope you write more and share it...

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