An allegory: The Twelve Brothers

by seattleniceguy 15 Replies latest watchtower beliefs

  • seattleniceguy
    seattleniceguy

    Hello!

    When I first was beginning to see the light, I wrote this allegory as a spin on the old "what if you found a house in the middle of a desert" illustration Witnesses use all the time. I wrote it to explain in non-threatening terms to my Witness friends the way I was seeing the universe. Just thought I'd see what you all think....

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    The Twelve Brothers

    Twelve boys, brothers, lived in a large country house. The house stood in a remote location; the boys had never seen another person, or even another house. The house they lived in was well stocked with food and water, activities to keep them entertained, and even tools to build and repair things.

    The one thing that bothered the boys was that none of them, not even the oldest, had any recollection of how they had come to dwell together there. For each one of them, their earliest memory was of the whole group living together as they were now. Judging from the conditions of the house, many of the boys inferred that they must have a father, but they had never seen nor heard from him.

    Each boy took a different route in trying to determine their true identity and purpose. One compiled detailed measurements of the inside and outside of the house. Another boy began to study the animals he found. Yet another took up asking his brothers to relate their dreams, so that he might understand how their minds work. One boy looked inward by sitting daily in quiet contemplation of his thoughts and feelings. Some of the boys did not have an interest in such hard work, so instead they spent their days in play. Still another boy created a rudimentary form of worship designed to give honor to their father, whom he assumed must be interested in their welfare even though he had never directly revealed himself to them.

    One day, one of the older brothers produced a handwritten letter and declared to the surprise of all that he had had direct contact with their father. He explained that the father had written this letter in order to give the boys guidance in life. In the letter, there was a brief history of the house, some beautiful poetry, and many rules and principles. The letter revealed an intimate acquaintance with the details of the house and household. Why, a few of the boys were even called by name! Could this letter really be from the father?

    The reaction of the boys was mixed. Some immediately began to try to live by the contents of the letter. Some dismissed it as a fabrication of the older brother. Regrettably, some of the boys who believed it to be the word of the father broke off association from those who did not agree. For a time, a few of the boys even tried to use it to rule over their fellows. Meanwhile, a good half of them had never even seen this letter for themselves.

    Many years passed. The boys grew older, and some gradually died. The brothers that believed in The Letter, as they had affectionately come to call it, claimed that the father was due to arrive at any time. The affairs of the house were, after all, getting worse. The food was being depleted. The house needed difficult repairs. They clearly needed their father?s help.

    The brothers that did not believe in the imminent arrival of the father decided that it was their responsibility to look after the repairs and food situation, however ill-prepared they might be for such a task. Meanwhile, from a moral perspective, some of the brothers became selfish and mean, whereas some from both the Letter and non-Letter groups tried conscientiously to deal justly and with love to their fellows.

    This is the account of the history of the brothers. Today there remain the younger nine of the original twelve. What will tomorrow bring? Ask each of the brothers and you will get a different answer. What will the father expect of his boys if he does come for an accounting? If he never arrives, what will determine whether the boys lived good and full lives? Which of the surviving boys can say with certainty what the true nature of their existence is? Which has the right to insist that he is correct, while his fellows are wrong?

    Which boy are you?

  • Mystery
    Mystery

    One boy looked inward by sitting daily in quiet contemplation of his thoughts and feelings.

    I am not a boy but......

  • Valis
    Valis

    The antiprodigal one who tells them all to grow up and get on with it for dog's sake! Sod the dumb shiyat and be happy w/the good, be done w/ the rest.

    Sincerely,

    District Overbeer

  • seattleniceguy
    seattleniceguy

    I think I need to change that aspect, all the kids being boys. But honestly, my intention there was simply not to introduce complexity into the social dynamics of the children, because I didn't want to distract from from the larger issues, which are, How did we get here? Where did this house come from?

    Also, if I had had mixed sexes, it would have hurt the strength of the analogy by implying that reproduction was possible. I really didn't want to go there. The idea is that the children do not know how people come to exist. They have no direct evidence of a Father because they have never directly observed the means by which people come to exist. There is no precedent allowing them to infer a Father from reproductive activity.

    This point is important to me because Creationists will often say, "If you found a watch, would you not conclude the existence of a watchmaker?" The answer, of course, is that we do only because we have direct, unassailable evidence that all watches are in fact produced by watchmakers. We do not have a similar precedent regarding universes. I wanted to make sure that part of the analogy held true, so part of that meant keeping to one sex. I chose boys only because they seem to organize themselves hierarchically from an early age and so seemed like a good way to represent (sometimes warring) nations.

    Hope all that makes sense. But perhaps there is another device by which I can keep the allegory strong in this regard but have mixed sexes....I'd be open to any comments. It seems that about 20% of the women I show this to comment about it (although most seem to understand my intentions). I'm certainly open to criticism.

    SNG

  • Sentinel
    Sentinel

    If I were one of these boys, I'd be the one that Mystery identified with. The one who is observant, sits quietly and ponders his situation and the posibilities.

    I liked this analogy. Thanks!

    /< (of the feminine variety)

  • rune
    rune

    What a terrific short story! Props for writing this...I will be showing it to some of my friends. I am one of the boys who did not believe the letter, but also dealt with his fellows with compassion. And I am one who would jump at the chance to see real proof of the Father... but is not hopeful of getting any, since probability suggests it will not occur.

    Great job!

  • googlemagoogle
    googlemagoogle

    that's a great story... i am the one who at first believes in the letter because of not reading it, but later finding out it's my older brother's handwriting. i also find out about some inconsistencies in the history, because all other brothers tell a different story. i start doubting about the father ever comming, i also start doubting if we really are brothers and all have one father... lastly i start doubting the existence of the father. i wouldn't deny the possibility, but i would need harder evidence.

  • LittleToe
    LittleToe

    I like the allegory the way it stands. I think you made a good call regarding the gender. I would suggest you ask the women, who comment on this, whether or not they think the story would work as well if it were twelve sisters. Why not suggest they construct a parallel feminised one? I suspect a few of the elements would have to change.

    I'd be the brother living in the attic, that the story doesn't speak too much about, occasionally commenting that dad just called on the satellite phone. Of course no-one ever listens because everyone knows that sounds can't be transmitted through thin air (even if they do hear him chatting to his imaginary friend in his room). Neither do they take him up on his offer of going and using it themselves, because they're too embarrased about what the other boys might think if they saw them climbing the stairs. Besides, how do you use such a phone, and what if there's no-one at the other end? So although he's considered a little eccentric, he's tolerated as he goes about his everyday life and tries to help the various factions get along.

  • googlemagoogle
    googlemagoogle

    i hope when our annointed LT goes to heaven and rules along with jesus and the governing body over us ignorant atheists/agnostics/skeptics, he wont be too rigorous with us... LT, remember us when thou comest into thy kingdom.

  • LittleToe
    LittleToe

    google:You're assuming much about my belief system...
    If you really believe what you wrote then you don't know didly.

    But, sure, I'll remember ya Thomas

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