Writing academic/scholarly papers

by Lady Lee 28 Replies latest watchtower bible

  • Lady Lee
    Lady Lee

    This might be very boring for most people but some who were denied the opportunity to get a post-secondary education might find it an interesting perspective on what defines "scholarly" and "academic" work.

    The question concerning the scholarship of the WTS has come up a few times. I was never a Theology or a Religious Studies student. I took one university Religion course and had to write a couple of papers. By no means would I call myself a Religious "scholar". The title of the course was "On Death and Dying".

    In both college and university there are very specific guidelines regarding writing papers. All papers MUST follow those guidelines to be considered even remotely scholarly. Points are deducted for not following the guidelines. This is NOT unusual. All college and university courses require a set of guidelines that must be followed. Psychology has its own Publication Manual that all students must refer to. Even English courses have their own manual of guidelines for writing papers. And believe me the profs check to make sure you follow the guidelines. They even check out your references that must be written in a certain style.

    I might be laboring the point but it is crucial to understand that scholarly writing is very precise. It isn't just something you throw together and hope to get a good grade. These courses are preparation for those who decide to continue on in the academic field.

    I Googled "theology academic writing" I got "Results 11 - 20 of about 2,100,000 for theology academic writing" back. It's clearly not a small issue. All of the beginning hits are universities and colleges.

    Claremont School of Theology states:

    Writing is the primary tool of communication in academia. In most of your courses, your grade will be based primarily on the professor's evaluation of what you have written. Beyond the academy, writing is an essential tool of the professional world. The effectiveness of church bulletins, grant proposals, letters to the editor and a myriad of other writing tasks will to a large extent determine your effectiveness in the professional world whether as a pastor, political activist, teacher or wherever God may call you. Learning to write clearly is important [bold is mine]

    It's that important. In my quote above I altered the text by making some words bold. Academic writing requires that I tell you what I have changed. The link above tells you where I got that quote from. It is one of the many I could have used. The others pretty much have the identical info. If I had deleted part of the quotation I have to show that by use of ". . . " and what is left out MUST NOT change the intended meaning of the quoted author.

    The article continues:

    The style guidelines used in the humanities generally and at Claremont specifically are found in The Chicago Manual or Kate Turabian's A Manual for Writers (usually referred to as just "Turabian"). Turabian is a must for all doctoral students, and some faculty require Turabian even for master's level students. Turabian has more details than Form and Style but is harder to use and takes some practice to get used to. While Turabian is clearly more thorough, both Turabian and Form and Style are summaries of Chicago; so if you follow either faithfully, you will not run into problems. And therein is the core of the issue: faithfully following a style sheet. Either book will give the details about what your papers should look like (margins, fonts, layout, etc.) and how to properly use and cite sources. All you have to do is look it up.

    Pretty specific isn't it? Right down to "(margins, fonts, layout, etc.)". They leave nothing to the writers pleasure. If you want to be accepted as a scholar you follow the guidelines. If you look on the website is also goes into the nitty gritty of how to staple your paper.

    But let's go further down into writing the actual paper. There are several types of papers required in theology classes. For our purposes (as a comparison to the work that the WTS publishes) I will only look at the Exegesis.

    Exegesis is a technical form of writing in biblical studies. Generally speaking, exegesis is the disciplined examination of various aspects of a (usually biblical) text in order to determine the meaning of the text. Often each professor has specific guidelines for exegesis papers in terms of both content and outline, especially at the introductory level. In spite of the wide range of preferences and emphases in exegetical writing, there are some common characteristics in most exegesis papers. For example, exegesis papers do not always have a clearly stated thesis in the introduction. They tend to be organized by level of inquiry starting with textual issues, moving to literary and historical/cultural issues and ending with theological issues. Each paragraph or section of the exegesis paper looks at the given text (called a pericope) through a different lens. For example, one paragraph might examine the meaning of specific words in the pericope, the next might focus on a specific literary device (repetition, for example), the next might focus on a specific historical event that the pericope mentions. Each of these paragraphs (or sections in a longer paper) attempts to pull meaning from the pericope by examining it in a specific way or from a specific perspective. Rather than summary conclusions, exegesis papers tend to have conclusions which tie together the significant points of the essay to provide a somewhat unified meaning, interpretation or application of the pericope to a specific context. That context might be the context of the original author(s) or redactor(s), or some contemporary context.

    Has anyone here ever read a WT article in any magazine that follows this? I know I haven't. Even looking in the WT books that attempt to analyze certain Bible books don't follow this kind of scholarly work.

    Now you might say that the WT published books and literature are simplified so the average lay person can understand them. You might also believe that the "scholars" of the Governing Body (GB) do this work for the JWs so they don't have to. Sound nice of them doesn't it? How do you know if the y really are that nice, though? How would a person go about checking to verify what they have read in a WT book? That's what references are for. And believe me they have rules for this also. Plagiarism is a huge issue in academic writing. The article states:

    Unintentional plagiarism is a serious matter in graduate school. Unintentional plagiarism most often occurs when a student loses his or her own voice. That is, instead of the student remaining in control of what he or she is saying with his or her own voice. The scenario goes something like this: the student finds a source with whom he or she agrees and, making a few changes in wording, basically follows the structure of the source material. Even if citations are used, this is a recipe for plagiarism.

    The article has several examples of how to quote correctly and also what kinds of unintentional quotations are forbidden. Since the link above takes you to the page you can check this out for yourself.

    When you do quote from another author's work (or even from previous work you may have published) there are precise format for the quote to make sure a person can actually look up the quotation if they want more information. In the article I wrote for my one Religion course I had to cite my references. You can see this on my website at Social Death: The Practice of Disfellowshipping Among Jehovah's Witnesses At the beginning of the paper I state:

    In all known societies, social norms or rules are developed to define who is to be included in the group. Rules of behavior are accepted as legitimate by the members of the group. Pressure is placed on group members to conform to the norms of the group. This is the process of social control (Napier, 1981).

    In that paragraph I paraphrase a comment from a book by Napier that was written in 1981. At the end of the paper I cite the reference:

    Napier, R.W. & Gershenfeld, M.K. (1981). Groups: Theory and experience (2nd ed.). Boston: Houghton-Mifflin.

    You now know where I got the quote from. Since I am referring to a process called "social control" you could search the index of Napier's book for "social control" and find the page and comment I cited. If I was quoting from an article in an academic journal I would add the page number(s).

    The way the WTS treats true academic and scholarly works is illegal and unethical. It certainly isn't academic or scholarly.

  • Honesty
    Honesty

    Excellent deduction, LL.

    The way the WTS treats true academic and scholarly works is illegal and unethical. It certainly isn't academic or scholarly.

    Never has been. Never will be. Why?

    Because it would expose their half-truths and deceptions.

  • Leolaia
    Leolaia

    I just read a QFR from 1960 (5/15, p. 318-320) which actually tries to take Dr. Bruce Metzger to task for his negative review of the NWT and his criticism about the insertion of "Jehovah" into the NT in particular. It is quite funny, filled with condescending statements like "If Dr. Metzger has read the Foreword of the above volume through, then he should have learned..." and "It is very easy for a trinitarian theologian of Christendom to carp at a Bible translation that does not agree with his trinitarian doctrine," while entirely side-stepping the main problem he brought up....

  • Lady Lee
    Lady Lee

    yes they really are quite practised at skirting the main issues.

    When I was writing the above, several times I found myself slipping into sarcasm. I had to go back and rewrite it. I can't very well sit here and type out a post about academic writing and then blow the deal with sarcasm. It really does detract from the real intent of the piece. I even did a spell check on it.

    What really amazes me is that there are educated people who read what the WTS puts out and believe it!!! What did they do with their critical thinking skills that they were supposed to learn in college and university? Yea yea I know I've been posting over the last few weeks about the power of thought reform and manipulation. But I'm still amazed

  • bikerchic
    bikerchic

    Lady Lee that sure does raise a lot of questions about the honesty of the WTS to it's readers doesn't it?

    I'm certainly not much of a scholar but I can read and I did catch this, the quote you gave from Claremont School of Theology. I grew up near Claremont, it is a big College city I double checked to make sure it was the same place.

    Located 35 miles east of Los Angeles and within an hour of beaches, mountains and desert areas, Claremont is well located and very accessible. Claremont School of Theology, along with one graduate and five undergraduate schools, makes the city of Claremont a world-renowned academic community.

    Claremont School of Theology is 35 miles east of Los Angeles.

    Yep it was right near where I grew up, who knew? LOL

    Thanks for the lesson Lee.

  • VM44
    VM44

    Hi Lady Lee.

    "The way the WTS treats true academic and scholarly works is illegal and unethical. It certainly isn't academic or scholarly."

    Very True! What The Watchtower writes is indoctrinational propaganda! And so almost anything goes, lack of references, strawman arguments, use of fallacies, and so on.

    And the sad thing is, the JWs accept whatever The Watchtower prints as consisting of "accurate knowledge"! Truly sad.

    --VM44

  • Death to the Pixies
    Death to the Pixies

    Leo:I just read a QFR from 1960 (5/15, p. 318-320) which actually tries to take Dr. Bruce Metzger to task for his negative review of the NWT and his criticism about the insertion of "Jehovah" into the NT in particular. It is quite funny, filled with condescending statements like "If Dr. Metzger has read the Foreword of the above volume through, then he should have learned..." and "It is very easy for a trinitarian theologian of Christendom to carp at a Bible translation that does not agree with his trinitarian doctrine," while entirely side-stepping the main problem he brought up.... Reply: The NWTC would not have a problem taking the Metzger to task in general for his bias, looking back at some of his comments against the NWT ,bias was clearly shown, even some ignorance.. Saying John 1:1 was a "frightening mistranslation" because the Committee was apparently unaware of "Colwells rule". How he knew they were not aware of this rule, is up to anybodys guess. Given this sloppiness, you can see why they may have been annoyed and disappointed in Metzgers criticism in general. But in this instance, what do you feel is his main objection, and in what way did the QFR not address it?

  • Lady Lee
    Lady Lee

    It really is a small world isn't it Kate? Of all the links I chose funny it was a college you had heard of.

    I've just about had it with WT "scholarship". It is just so far from legitimate academia that the comparison is absurd.

    VM44

    And the sad thing is, the JWs accept whatever The Watchtower prints as consisting of "accurate knowledge"! Truly sad
    Well once you establish yourself as God's spokesperson then people are going to believe whatever you tell them. Like who questions God? Reminds me of a certain Star Trek movie. Yes that actually sounds right. They are just about in outer space in their beliefs. Mind you isn't that where Russell thought God lived in the Pleiades?
  • unclebruce
    unclebruce

    Good post Lady Lee,

    To anyone but an indoctrinated JW, the "brooklyn bible scholars" haven't the academic credentials of a dead slug. To even the cursory reader Watchtower litterature is so loaded with doublespeak & false reasoning you'd think they'd authored the definative book on mind control. The WBTS is not, if it ever was, about true scholarship. It is about power. Power exercised through the mind numbing effect of a constant diet of literature designed to win over new converts and keep 'them' in line. The nearest your average bro or sis gets to a genuine academic work is when he or she walks past a university or public library.

    When I first posted on the net - The Farkelmeister recomended I do a course on logic fallacy to help me write more formally about the various Watchtower tricks I was describing. Eventually I did.

    unclebruce's ready reconer/bullshit detector:

    FALLACIES OF PRESUMPTION

    When the premises of an argument presume what they purport to prove.

    BEGGING THE QUESTION - the question is left unanswered.

    This is when the arguer creates the illusion that his/her inadequate premises provide adequate support for the conclusion. For example: by leaving out a key premise, by restating a premise as the conclusion or by reasoning in a circle.

    COMPLEX QUESTION ? a single answer to a multi barreled question.

    This is when two or more questions are asked as a single question and a single answer is given to both.

    FALSE DICHOTOMY

    When an arguer presents two non-jointly exhaustive alternatives as if they were jointly exhaustive and then eliminates one, leaving the other as the conclusion.

    SUPPRESSED EVIDENCE

    When the arguer ignores relevant evidence that outweighs the presented evidence and entails a very different conclusion.

    FALLACIES OF WEAK INDUCTION

    When the conclusion between premises and conclusion is not strong enough to support the conclusion.

    APPEAL TO UNQUALIFIED AUTHORITY

    When the arguer cites the testimony of an unreliable authority in support of a conclusion.

    APPEAL TO IGNORANCE

    When the arguer uses the fact that nothing has been proved about something to support a conclusion about that thing.

    HASTY GENERALISATION ? converse accident

    When the arguer draws a general conclusion from a specific case.

    FALSE CAUSE

    When the arguer?s conclusion depends on some imagined causal connection that probably doesn't exist.

    SLIPPERY SLOPE

    When the arguers conclusion rests on an alleged chain reaction, and there is no sufficient reason to think that the chain reaction will actually take place.

    WEAK ANALOGY

    When the arguers conclusion rests on an alleged analogy (or similarity) that is not strong enough to support it.

    FALLACY OF AMBIGUITY

    These occur because of an ambiguity in the premises or conclusion.

    EQUIVOCATION

    This occurs because some word is used implicitly or explicitly in two different senses.

    AMPHIBOLY

    Occurs when the conclusion of an argument depends upon the misinterpretation of a statement that is ambiguous owing to some structural defect.

    FALLACIES OF GRAMATICAL ANALOGY

    These occur because of a grammatical similarity to other arguments that are non-fallacious.

    COMPOSITION

    Occurs when the conclusion of an argument depends on the erroneous transference of the attributes of the parts of something onto the whole.

    DIVISION

    Occurs when the conclusion of an argument depends on the erroneous transference of the attributes of a whole (or class) onto the parts (or members).

    FALLACIES OF RELEVANCE

    These occur when the premises of an argument are irrelevant to the conclusion.

    APPEAL TO FORCE

    When the arguer threatens listeners to get them to accept a conclusion.

    APPEAL TO PITY

    When the arguer attempts to support his/her conclusion by evoking listener?s pity.

    APPEAL TO THE PEOPLE

    When the arguer plays on listeners psychological needs (eg: vanity, snobbery, ?get on the bandwagon?) to force agreement.

    STRAWMAN

    When the arguer distorts his/her opponents argument to more easily attack it, demolishes the distorted argument and concludes that the opponents real argument has been demolished.

    MISSING THE POINT

    When the premises lead to a particular conclusion but a different conclusion is drawn (or one which may be only vaguely related).

    RED HERRING

    The arguer diverts attention by addressing extraneous issues and presumes some conclusion has been established.

    ARGUMENT AGAINST THE PERSON

    Criticising the character of a person in order to discredit their argument.

    · ad homonym abusive

    Abusing the opponent rather than considering his/her ideas.

    · ad homonym circumstantial

    Attacking opponent?s circumstances not ideas.

    · ? You too ?

    When the arguer shifts the burden of guilt onto a second arguer to discredit argument.

    ~end~

  • Lady Lee
    Lady Lee

    Thank You unclebruce. It's nice to see you posting again.

    As I read through your post I can see all of this in the JW apologists who post here. They use just about all of them. It's 4:15 am here so I will have to read it again tomorrow. But excellent info to help us understand the kinds of arguments the JWs use to "prove" their point or "disprove" ours.

    Ok I really have to get to bed

    Nite all

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