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drum beats move these feet on sliding concrete
fusion skylights even at night
stopping your traffic
coloring your pencil
just a slice by, nice
i dropped my chopsticks
this wrapper is thin, where to begin
metropolice
by wanton 1 Replies latest jw friends
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Joel Wideman
Welcome to the board. Nice poem. I liked the rhyming in the first and last lines. I was a little confused - I missed the connection between the title and the content, or even the relationship between the individual lines.
Anyway... how about telling us about yourself?