A poem I wrote about my dad....

by ColdRedRain 6 Replies latest social family

  • ColdRedRain
    ColdRedRain

    Take a look at

    The moon

    You'll see it's silver shimmer

    You'll see it's craters, honey

    You'll see it's phases.

    Take a look at

    The moon

    Like men of long ago did.

    Like men of today did.

    See all it's phases.

    All men under the moon are not immortal.

    I look at

    The moon.

    With the neighbor's cat purring

    With my dear father laughing.

    Both have moved on.

    I look at

    The moon

    Solitary in body but not in spirit.

    He's with me during midnight.

    Watching the moon.

    It's been 9 months since my dad passed away. My favorite thing to do with him right before we passed away was to feed the neighbor's cats and watch the moon. We both marveled at it's errie glow. We also marveled at the fact that men thousands of years ago also did the same thing, watching this shimmering white peice of rock in an immense vacum.

    The neighbors who had the cat that always visited me and my dad moved away.

    Now I look at the moon by myself. Not really. I always have somebody watching it with me.

  • Special K
    Special K

    Hi coldredrain

    I was very touched by your poem.

    I felt your emotion in it..

    You must have had a special relationship during these times with your Dad. Sometimes it's not the big things we do that convey love and feeling .. I think most of the time it's the little things like the time you spent together watching the moon.

    very nice poem, indeed

    Special K

  • imallgrowedup
    imallgrowedup

    Wow.

    That was beautiful, CRR. I'm sorry about your dad passing away - it sounds like you miss him alot. I understand about putting your feelings into poetry - I do the same thing - it helps ease the pain, doesn't it?

    I wish there was more I could say....

    growedup

  • 4JWY
    4JWY

    {{{ColdRedRain}}} ~ loved your poem and so happy you shared those moments with your dad. I know you will treasure them for a lifetime of warmth.

    4JWY

  • Bubbamar
    Bubbamar

    Coldredrain

    Thanks for posting that poem. My dad died a few years ago. He was only 57. The first year was SO hard...I really felt your poem! Hang in there buddy!

  • Lehaa
    Lehaa

    I loved your poem CRR.

    Sorry about the loss of your father.

    Your poem was beautifull. Thankyou for sharing it with us.

  • StinkyPantz
    StinkyPantz

    ((CRR))

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