New lyrics to a song, are they too strong? looking for feedback

Greybeard

I’m addicted to love

I’m addicted to the Big O

So all you hypocrites

Stop knocking at my doe

Cuz I don’t need any one around

Who is trying to bring me down

Don’t you worry about me

If my feet leave the ground…

I’m addicted to Freedom

I’m addicted to Truth

I’m addicted to peace and happiness

Not the lies of my youth

You serve Jesus

With a cup of Chemo

Preaching parasites

With a crazy ego…

God is going to kill me at armageddon

If I don’t follow you?

You look half dead

Will he do that to me too?

I’m addicted to Freedom

I’m addicted to Truth

I’m addicted to peace and happiness

Not the lies of my youth

I wonder what demonic snakes

Are eating your brains

Biological Armageddon

These are your remains

I predict the birds will eat

The worms inside that body

Go ahead and have another

Chemo hot toddy…

I’m addicted to Freedom

I’m addicted to Truth

I’m addicted to peace and happiness

Not the lies of my youth

Nice job Greybeard. Powerful lyrics but songwriters need to openly express themselves. I've written several songs about gaining freedom from the WT organization that are quite direct as well. Leave no stone unturned my friend. You are healing yourself in a therapeutic manner and we never know who else we may help to heal in the process. Feel no guilt, feel no fear, feel, live, and write about freedom of mind. I've got a song right now cooking in the oven titled " Tear off These Chains " I'm currently working on. Music is a healing force my friend continue to heal yourself and others ! Take care, Peace out, Mr. Flipper

Greybeard

You know it flipper, thank you! I would love to hear your music.

LevelThePlayingField

I like it, Rock on! If it's rock that is. Pretty funny too.

New lyrics to a song, are they too strong? looking for feedback

Greybeard

flipper

Greybeard

LevelThePlayingField

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