Love will save the world

by LoveUniHateExams 2 Replies latest jw friends

  • LoveUniHateExams
    LoveUniHateExams
    He tried to part the cold, white blanket with frozen fingers.
    Shivering now, his cold blue eyes focused on her pale, soft skin, her butterknife cheek.
    The city of lights in her eyes.

    Their love saved them from disturbing fate.


    If they only knew.
    If they only knew.


    The two thin figures faded into the night.
    The stars twinkled faintly.


    If they only knew.
  • LoveUniHateExams
    LoveUniHateExams

    ^^^ The above post was written when me and a mate had a joint and decided to do some creative writing.

    I wrote the above while my mate wrote something else.

    What I wrote is inspired by the film Let The Right One In and by the Beatles song Within You Without You.

    That was the idea: pick a film and a song you love and just write something based on that.

    I thought what I wrote was pretty cool so I went back and wrote two more verses, making a poem.

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    The greasy pillow disgusts her.

    All her puzzles have been done.

    The stale, sour milk was never touched.

    The bread is not needed, but she must eat.

    All alone for so long, she shuts her apartment door and steps outside into the chill night air.


    If they only knew.


    He rinses out the pissball.

    School is over, and it was a tough one today.

    He walks straight to his room, ignoring his mum.

    He finishes the sweets he swiped and opens his scrapbook.

    His thoughts turn dark and settle upon Jonny and Micke.


    If they only knew.


    He tried to part the cold, white blanket with frozen fingers.

    Shivering now, his clear blue eyes focused on her pale, soft skin, her butterknife cheek.

    The city of lights in her eyes.


    If they only knew.


    All was quiet in the inky blackness, the stars twinkled faintly.

    The two thin figures faded into the night.

    Friendship and love will save the world from disturbing fate.


    If they only knew.

  • stan livedeath
    stan livedeath

    maybe Terry will like this--hes into that sort of stuff.

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