Awakening:

by SheilaM 5 Replies latest social entertainment

  • SheilaM
    SheilaM

    Awakening Too

    Mrs. Pontieller, I believe had the right idea.

    You can sacrifice all but not yourself,

    Best to shed your clothes on the white, hot sand and walk slowly.

    Footprints following you into the briny gulf.

    Green- blue water slowly caressing your feet, then ankles, then calves, then thighs.

    Waves pushing then pulling,

    Sand sliding underfoot being pulled as you are.

    Waves pounding, beating the shore.

    Blood pounding in your breast, in your temple, in your soul.

    Your eyes see the emptiness before you,

    Your heart feels the emptiness behind you.

    Your feet become entangled in green, slimy, ropelike things.

    You stumble, you lurch but do not fall.

    Your mind is entangled in flowery words, cagey elusive things.

    They caught you ,changed you, destroyed you.,

    They stumbled you, you are falling still!

    Pushed, pulled bye waves as they reach your firm butt,

    your fleshy waist, your copious breasts.

    Pushed, pulled by wants, needs, desires.

    Body responding to the undulating sea.

    The Gulf teeming with life flashes of silver, crunching of shells harboring coelenterates.

    Your mind void of thought, instant images blurry,

    then crystal clear,

    popping from one to the other,

    sheltering delusions.

    Floating, touching, floating,

    your world now of dark water!

    The end

    SheilaM 03

  • SheilaM
    SheilaM

    Can you say post that bombed

  • jgnat
    jgnat

    Wow.

    That was deep.

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    Dead silence.

  • SheilaM
    SheilaM

    Jgnat: Thanks I don't consider myself deep but that is what everyone says<needs to investigate self more> LOL

  • dottie
    dottie

    Yet another fine piece of work from Sheila !!!

    Maybe you should consider publishing some of your work as well and Thunder can do the artwork??

    Well done Sheila !!!!!!!

    Dottie...of the waiting for more of Sheila's work class...

  • SheilaM
    SheilaM

    Dottie:

    Thanks so muchI showed my English teacher this today, I had her last semester and read the Awakening I've tossed the poem around since then. SHE LOVED it and asked for a copy and didn't shred it to pieces. LOL

    Hmm Thunder draw and I publish...not sure if I'm ready to show the world just you guys who I trust

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