Want to help out with the final shaping of my piece for Salon? Want a sneak peek?
Go here: http://www.satanosphere.com/story/2002/6/4/15314/49380
Article draft on Satanosphere
by mikepence 2 Replies latest jw friends
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Celia
Mike,
I just finished reading your article.
I think it is very good.
Very clear and to the point.
Maybe your editor is right about the first paragraph, it should explain better what it's all about, as the majority of readers don't know anything about the JWs and their pedophile problem.
Congratulations, you're a great writer. -
mikepence
Thanks for the kind words. I have been wrestling with self-doubt recently, but I keep trying.