My Love

by Frenchy 5 Replies latest social entertainment

  • Frenchy

    This is my one and only attempt at free style (no rhyme) tell me what you think...

    My love seeketh her in the wind and trees and the valleys and mountains..
    Through waist deep streams of crystal waters dashing upon smooth pebble I search for thee.
    Oh but to hold thee and to feel thy warm embrace...
    For the fires of the sun would be naught to compare with thy love... thy embrace...
    The flames of love thrash about like a thousand tempests in an ocean of fire...
    Into the cool blue skies they thrust upwards, reaching, searching to consume
    The angel of my dreams who resides oh so far above me... so unreachable..
    How my soul is anguished ... my heart unfulfilled, what tortures my soul endures,,,
    In this unrequited love of mine...

  • Seven

    Frenchy, That was different. Very nice. You should
    try your luck at song writing or start you own greeting card company. :)

  • Frenchy


  • RedhorseWoman

    I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes, Frenchy. Your verse is always so evocative. It would be wonderful to be loved like that. (sigh)

  • Frenchy

    Thank you very much Red. I agree with you that it would indeed be very wonderful to be loved in such a manner. (sigh!)

  • Oubliette
    Frenchy, that's beautiful, even 15 years later!

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