some orginal work

by wonderwoman77 2 Replies latest social entertainment

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  wonderwoman77

  Decision
  My heart cries out in tender pain
  For an end to all the rain.
  Sorrow and grief is heard by all
  The world is crumbling; it will fall.
  Down on its knees, it will lay and bleed
  Violence. Will it always be a need?

  I need to yell. I need to scream.
  All my life can be is a fairy tale dream.
  Shattered about in mass confusion
  Making sense of it would only be futile.
  Fixing the fragments would only blemish the beauty.

  I move on, trying to be stong
  Cliniging to the fragments,
  Making choices with no answers
  What is right?
  What is wrong?
  I remain here hanging on?

  Stephanie
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  FreePeace

  Hi Stephanie,

  I like your poem. At least to me, it speaks of the pain of a changed world view.

  I especially like the positive slant when you said, "Fixing the fragments would only blemish the beauty."

  This is really true.

  Good job!

  FreePeace
  "The World is my country, and to do good, my religion." --Thomas Paine
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  wonderwoman77

  Thanks FreePeace. I wrote it when I was first entering college. I was beginning to change myself and become who I am today, but I was also dealing with all the pain of my past that made me who I was at that time, messing with that too much, would destroy the person I was....This is one poem that I wrote that I feel speaks to me still today....Glad you enjoyed it...I may post some more orginal work later....