What is she to me?

by AhHah 6 Replies latest social entertainment

  • AhHah
    AhHah

    What Is She To Me?

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    A knowing look and she sees the depths of me,
    The secrets no one else has found.
    She chooses to see all that is good in me,
    When friends are no longer around.
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    Alone I sit searching the stars for answers,
    Through the vast, empty longings of eternity.
    She is silent as I seek solace for long, lonely hours,
    For soon I shall surrender to her serenity.
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    When all I am is slipping slowly away,
    When doubts and fears have taken their toll,
    A soft touch from her hand and I embrace the day,
    Her peace fills the empty places in my soul.
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    When I am happy she is my song.
    Her smile melts away all my pain.
    In her eyes I know beauty, I know I belong.
    In her arms I am alive again.
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    She is the enlightenment of dawn's first finger of light.
    She is the evening star shining through tempest and rain.
    She is the nightingale singing in the heart of the night.
    She is all I shall ever want, more than I shall ever attain.
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    Edited by - AhHah on 11 October 2000 2:19:46

  • waiting
    waiting

    Thank you, AhHah,

    For an early Sunday morning smile.

    And you are in sooooo much trouble if this poem is not about your pretty wife..........

    waiting

  • AhHah
    AhHah

    Thanks, Waiting.

    Of COURSE it is about my beautiful wife.

  • Seven
    Seven

    AhHah, Thank you for sharing that beautiful poem with us. Seven

  • AhHah
    AhHah

    Thanks Seven!

    Please let me know if you think the new edited version above is an improvement. Sometimes it is hard to take words away, but usually it helps. What do you think?

  • Seven
    Seven

    AhHah, Yes, it was an improvement, without detracting from the emotion of the poem. Well done. You two have something very beautiful going on. Be happy. Seven

  • AhHah
    AhHah

    At last ... the final revision?

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